I love the description you gave in the beginning. I feel like many American families can relate to the problem because many experience it. Linking the idea with the do not disturb feature seen on smart phones is a smart idea since most customers are already familiar with that function on their cellphones. Also, stressing the importance of the cons of the workaholic mindset is a good point to drive more awareness to the problem for the customers!
I think your elevator pitch is very well done! I liked your introduction because it got to the point right away. Also, your speaking was at a really good paced and you were very clear. Your pitch was very relatable and caught my attention. You drove your pitch home by providing the pros and cons of excessive focus on work. Well done!
Hi Tara! Wow, you really did a good job on this elevator pitch. You can tell that you've watched the videos and took what he said to heart through your slow speech. You are dressed very professionally, which is good, but you also seem a little unsure of yourself, which is ok because it is only a pitch. I believe that this pitch would have gotten you through my door and into my office.
Hi Tara, I think your elevator pitch was well structured and executed. You got the audience engaged from the very beginning. You maintained a personal touch, which made the problem more understandable and sounded like it needs to be solved urgently. Your solution was crystal clear and straight to the point. You mentioned prices and plans that made everything easily understandable. You ended with a call for action which improved the effectiveness of your pitch.
I love the description you gave in the beginning. I feel like many American families can relate to the problem because many experience it. Linking the idea with the do not disturb feature seen on smart phones is a smart idea since most customers are already familiar with that function on their cellphones. Also, stressing the importance of the cons of the workaholic mindset is a good point to drive more awareness to the problem for the customers!
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ReplyDeleteI think your elevator pitch is very well done! I liked your introduction because it got to the point right away. Also, your speaking was at a really good paced and you were very clear. Your pitch was very relatable and caught my attention. You drove your pitch home by providing the pros and cons of excessive focus on work. Well done!
Hi Tara!
ReplyDeleteWow, you really did a good job on this elevator pitch. You can tell that you've watched the videos and took what he said to heart through your slow speech. You are dressed very professionally, which is good, but you also seem a little unsure of yourself, which is ok because it is only a pitch. I believe that this pitch would have gotten you through my door and into my office.
Hi Tara,
ReplyDeleteI think your elevator pitch was well structured and executed. You got the audience engaged from the very beginning. You maintained a personal touch, which made the problem more understandable and sounded like it needs to be solved urgently. Your solution was crystal clear and straight to the point. You mentioned prices and plans that made everything easily understandable. You ended with a call for action which improved the effectiveness of your pitch.